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It was a hot early summers day in May when I experienced probably the most life alternating thing a person could experience It was at the very end of my freshmen year but yet I remember this day like it was yesterday I saw some of my older sisters very close friends drenched in blood hanging out of a wrecked car and I heard the sound of the firefighters talking to each other by radio The way I felt that day made me realize my devotion to educating people about the dangers of drinking and driving This experience was fortunately just a stimulation of an alcohol related car collision yet it all seemed so real Everything from the smashed up cars to the police firefighters and ambulance made it feel like it wasnt all just an act it made me feel like it actually happened right on Templeton High Schools upper football field Never in my life had I seen such a moving horrific image that I know will be very hard for me to forget To some people they just thought of this just as a reason to get out of class and after three years they have probably forgotten about it To me and hopefully many others its motivating to make smart decisions when it comes to drinking and driving
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