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What is a dream Is it just an eight hour fantasy in our headas we sleep Is it an alternate world in which we enter No one knowsfor sure but what I do know is that it is the very thing that made methe person I am today I was born in Brooklyn New York but raised inLong Island Growing up was pretty difficult I did not have manyfriends at that time since I was often made fun of for my weight Iremember in 2nd grade when one of my classmates called me Fat Albertjust because I was wearing a red shirt Eventually as time went by thenicknames I was given would get worst by the second I finally made my1st friend in 3rd grade his name His Name was Nelson Nelson alwayswould stand up for me when I would be made fun of One day in 4th gradeNelson gave me an Eminem CD When I started listening to him I wasinspired Eminem and I basically grew up the same way We both used toget made fun of in school and we both had a passion for music While Iwas being made fun of in school I would go home and write music Themusic I wrote was based on how I felt that day As I started to getolder I began to realize the passion and gift in music that I had WhenI entered high school in 2008 I decided to record one of my songsAfter listening to the recording I envisioned myself being in the musicfield professionally Now at 17 years old I have a lot to thank musicfor it helped me gain friends find a new passion and gave me a reasonto believe in myself again College is somewhat like music Collegebuilds and teaches you how to see things from a different perspectiveIt gives you a surrounding in where
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