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Her hair So motionless and weak that its lack of luster made it looked as dull as coffee And her eyes remarkably brown her cheerless sight was unenlightened they were uncertainly intense and profound Her aspect was just rubbishy her clothes worthless and vulgar But her skin so unusual her light complexion was just different Different from everybody elses outstanding There was something special Id never seen before her attitude Rebel without a cause And that was what made her sexually desirable Not her looks her attitude I was just looking for some intimacy a little fling No strings attached But she was different she escaped boundaries and those boundaries were extreme That prudish and lunatic aunt of hers turned her so unreachable that possessing her like I did was unthinkable My control over her gave me power I was superior and I possessed the unimaginable what was banned Because I heard the rumorsShe seeing that old guy I excel him At the end she chose me over himNow everything was within reach I had everything I wanted and not only I had what I was supposed to avoid but I commanded her My different encounters were worthless they didnt contribute anything just sexually pleased me But Dorcas she was a challenge I was even more popular than before and could be even betterI had the solution I could reconstruct her achieve the perfect woman Long dazzling hair smooth and melodious Perfect skin delicate and flawless thick red lips and extended eyelashes Embroidered clothes that showed off her body and expensive jewelry But she was difficult Her clamorous voice and unbearable attitude All over the place And dont even let me start with her laziness hours and hours of sleep All she did sleep eat and excessively try to impress me With that stupid modest ring of hers bragging Luckily she realized she exceeded eating and started playing with her food but I had
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