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I leapt down from the van and I could hear the gushing waters of Noahs Ark I could hear kids screaming from inside the rides with joy and terror combined As I and my 5 cousins approached our first ride Black Anaconda we were terrified to see a group of five-year-olds crying when they exited the ride My five cousins and I Vamsi Gautam Shravan Teja and Dhivya all took the risk and decided to go for the ride Since the ride could fit three people in one tube me Dhivya and Gautam were in one tube all together while Vamsi Shravan and Teja were in the other tube When all three of us got in the water slide the worker pushed us off the platform We were disappointed by the boring dull slide As I started thinking Why were the groups of five year olds crying I felt a sudden jolt of speed and excitement My cousins and I were screaming with excitement as the slide sped us through the somber scary tunnel The slide took us outside where we saw that we were high up in the air Then suddenly we were airborne and the tube took flight We were in the air for almost one minute Everyone in my tube including me was screaming their lungs off Then we landed kind of roughly but it was not that serious Our tube then escaped the Terror Filled Ride The tubes speed slowly decreased in a pool of water which was the exit After Black Anaconda we went to another ride called Black Thunder To me this ride sounded kind of creepy and terrifying all at the same time but we decided to give it a try The line was way too long and the estimated time in line was 30 minutes which to me was not a whole lot of time but to my cousins it was a lot We all decided to
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