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It was a cold and windy day in March 2005 I remember this day like itwas yesterday I had been feeling funny all that day I knew somethingwas going to happen but I just didnt know what I was just gettingready to be dismissed from school The air was chilly out when Istepped out the front door I felt chills run down my back as I began towalk to the bus stop I had so much on my mind of what to expect when Igot home and how it would affect me now and in the futureNext I took a good glance to see if I could spot my brother but hewas nowhere around I continued to walk to the bus stop thinking aboutmy life and why I felt so funny I finally made it to the bus stop andthere was my brother standing with a crowd of friends When we got homeI looked over to my uncles truck and saw my little sister crying Ifigured it was nothing maybe she got in trouble at school and gotpopped in the head So being a goof ball like my brother is hereached out to my uncle saying Give me a hug my uncle said boyyou need to stop playing your going to need a hug after I tell you whatI have to tell you my stomach dropped instantly my uncle face wasserious so I knew it wasnt good news We all went into the house Hetold us to sit down at the kitchen table Soon as I got comfortable heregoes my goofy brother again falling to his knees saying Aw my mommadead my uncle said boy get up and you need to stop playing becauseyour momma really is dead He instantly froze with a dumb look on hisface my heart dropped to the floor I felt like I couldnt breath Icouldnt control my eyes from watering up from the news I just heard Iran
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