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December 7 1975Dear Diary Today is the kite tournament the day that kids in Kabul have waiting for during the winter time and it is one of the highlights of the wintertime In the morning Hassan told me that he had a dream about us swimming in the lake which everyone said there is a monster in it I think his dream was kind of stupid because he cant even swim He continues by saying that we kept swimming even though they crowd of people ask us to come out but than we proof them that there wasnt any monster and they changed the name of the Lake after our name and call it Lake of Amir and Hassan Sultans of Kabul I really think that it is a dumb dream because there is nothing happen in it Hassan told me that his father told him that every dream always has a meaning but I answered him a curt reply I didnt mean do be that mean to Hassan its just that I am really nervous When the time came I was really nervous and afraid that if I didnt win the kite tournament what would Baba said I was going to give up but than Hassan told me that it is such a beautiful day and he reminded me that there is no monster and that makes me feel more comfortable and relieved Finally I made up my mind by flying the kite Hassan test the wind direction and he held the kite high and tossed it There was dozens of kites flying in the sky and soon the cutting is starting I was so nervous about the tournament and I kept looking to the rooftop where Baba sitting and thinking whether Baba cheering for him or enjoy watching me failed My mind is mixed with all of those thought about Baba By three oclock the numbers of surviving kites are down to half
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