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Everyone loves to go to the beach with their family There is a lot of beaches to visit in California They are usually overcrowded and never clean Camp Pendleton the military base has a well-kept beach I really enjoy visiting the beach That is why my favorite place to visit is Del Mar beach in Oceanside California because the view is breathtaking I can always relax while there and I create everlasting memoriesI often had a lot stress while living in California When I need to clear my mind the first place I thought of was taking the family to the shore and unwind When we arrive the children race out of the car finally I dont have to listen to bickering As soon as I step out of the car the cool calming breeze hits my face and suddenly I feel the stress just melt away The tiring walk in the deep sand also helps relieve a lot of tension While the car ride is to Del Mar is a hassle you cant help but admire the beautiful scenery The winding roads are a lined with tall bold mountains Upon pulling in to the surprisingly empty parking lot all you see in the background is mile and miles of deep blue water I slowly walk to the water admiring the sight stepping onto the golden sand Finally I reach the ocean waves crashing against the rocky wall I love the view it is so perfect as in a painting The beauty is something I can never forget the memories you make at the beach are wonderful I havent been to the beach in a while but I can still close my eyes and remember how it looked The memories I have made with my family is something I will always treasure Being able to watch your family so carefree playing along the sparkling
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