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Both of my parents migrated to the US in order to find a better life but have found themselves struggling to make ends meet My father never finished high school and my mother graduated from high school in Illinois but stopped her education there As of today no one on my dads side of the family has managed to make it to a university I would love being the first in the family to have the privilege to attend a university It has always been a dream of mine to go to a university and to demonstrate to my parents that my hard work and their hard work have paid off Seeing my family struggle makes me want to attend a university so that I wont have to go through the same struggles and I can have a well paying job and be financially stable With my dreams to attend a university and have a well paying job also comes being able to afford for my family and not have to worry about where the next paycheck is coming from My mom has been extraordinarily encouraging and always has great advice that really affects the types of dreams I have for the future I have always made sure to work hard at sports and my mom was the one who gave me the advice to go into swimming now I want to be one of the best swimmers and perhaps attend the Olympics One day she looked up at me while I was doing my homework and sat beside me she said Always put yourself before anyone else You need to work hard for yourself not anyone else because in the end this will affect youAfter what she had told me I was determined never to settle for less Having a family who continues to have a strong relationship even though life seems to become harder each day has given me a stronger need to
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