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I had been planning our escape for many months Everything had to be right for my plan to succeed Our life on the wallpaper was a bad one We had no freedom and could do nothing for fear that the humans might discover us We thought this the way of life until one day we saw a white bird fly by our third floor window It looked so happy and free while we were stuck to wallpaper From then on I was elected to formulate a plan of escaping It was mid-March and the window was left open frequently I knew this was an advantage on our part I decided that we had to make our get away before summer started or else the window would be open less The beginning of May seemed like a good time to leave I had to make sure that all of us would make it out the window before any humans noticed If one of us did not make it out the window I would be to blame I needed to make certain that everyone would make it out in an orderly fashion as to not alert any humans If the rustle of wings happened to attract a passer-bys ears our plan would be abandoned and we would be discovered The day came when our opportunity was most ripe I all started when the window was opened The human who had opened it sat down by the table for a reason unknown to me It turned the pages to a book tirelessly and gazed out the window The human stayed in the room for what seemed like eternity which was all the better We needed to learn self-control before entering the vast new world The human finally stood up and walked out the door Its footsteps could be heard and we soon spotted it outside The time had come I slowly peeled myself from the wall alerted the
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