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When I get competitive I want to be the best One man in my high school sophomore year stood in my way His name was Amed Osuebu I played in the band and still do and when you are the best player you get all the cool stuff You have the hardest music to play and even parts that center on you In order to get these amazing attributes I would have to dethrone the king of the trombone And I wasnt readyI played what was known as a trombone You can picture a giant paper clip that makes music I was mad the day we got to high school though because my best friend at the time Holden was automatically put in the best band He was a guy with girth like jolly old Saint Nicholas a childs mind for humor and a father who worked as a dentist I only assume he has lots of money thanks to this and his family used it to bump him up to the top I was kept back to play with the more noob musicians I challenged my way up until eventually I had surpassed my friend I made it all the way to the second best player in the whole school However I was only second best and my challenge beganTwo men stood between me and being the best player in the school One of them was considerably the best paper clip player I knew Amed Osuebu The best player was a black kind of stout yet masculine figure He was two years older than me and shocking to me actually was homosexual not that it changes anything When he played it sounded like heaven had opened its gates and released a Chuck Norris of music How would I be able to beat that It took all my guts just too even ask him to a challenge The final factor though was my directorThe director
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