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Kibin. (2024). Nonverbal communication in presentations. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/nonverbal-communication-in-presentations-k4k3lEZK
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"“Nonverbal” is not hyphenated. Punctuation is placed inside quotation marks in American English. Use commas to clarify your meaning, such as in the last sentence of the second paragraph. A misplaced semicolon in the next paragraph interrupts the flow. Notice that you repeat the word “that.” You can catch such problems by running a grammar check. You can probably make your point without the last paragraph on page 1, and notice that you write “lack of boredom,” which I do not believe is your intent. The paragraph following your bullet list on page 2 is confusing and should be rewritten.
Your writing can be more concise, and you commit various errors that can be caught by proofreading."
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Kibin. (2024). Nonverbal communication in presentations. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/nonverbal-communication-in-presentations-k4k3lEZK
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