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Time after time I have been disappointed from my dad No matter what happens he lets me down he is a failure in my eyes My dad seemed never to care about what I do or where I go in life and my mom has never really been engaged in my life I lied over and over again to myself that my dad does care for me I always kind of thought my dad never accepted me After all the times he got drunk in front of me and beat me for no reason I still made excuses for his actions so Id never get hurt I always tried to make my dad proud hoping that one day he will do the same for me and change his act around I built a huge wall of denial and throughout all of my life I could never seem to break through it It was Saturday June 4th 2010 the day of my high school graduation I remember walking on the charcoal black track away from the bleachers My heart bounced up with every clump of noise my black stilettos made I gazed down to my diploma and thought this will make my dad proudThe excitement I had was more than anything I had ever felt but not for long As the ceremony ended I scurried through the crowd to find my family members I noticed a tall tan colored man with a bright yellow shirt about 20 ft away from me that I thought was my dad He turned away from me and I dashed to catch him and when I finally did I tapped him on his shoulder and said babadad No loser Congrats my brother replied My other brother came up from behind me and grabbed me He gave me a big hug along with my other siblings Wheres baba man My brother looked at me and just nodded his head At
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