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Many of the 15 million children in this world suffer from the experience of their parents getting divorced I was almost one of them The first 10 years of my life my life seemed as if it was a dream come true I had an older sister who protected me and a little brother who I pretended was my baby doll I also had two amazing successful and happy parents My dad was the president of a business and my mom was a teacher Our family had an outstanding income and life seemed as if it was going to stay this way forever As a few more years went by I could tell that things were starting to change between my parents but only being 12-13 years old I wasnt at the maturity level too identify what was actually going on I would come home and some nights my mom would be crying and I would ask her why All she would tell me is everythings fine and that was all I needed to hear well at least I thought so at that point My dad would be miserable and despondent My dad is an unbelievable role model in my eyes But as the years carried on I could tell that things were really going downhill for my family I was about 15 when my parents had finally told me my sister and brother that they were going to separate My sister and I were devastated but knew that it was what had to happen in order to have a happy mother I asked my mom what made her want to do this and she told me that she was married to a man who recently hadnt even shared money with her made her feel small and never gave her the attention she deserved On the other hand this isnt exactly what my dad wanted in fact he despised everything about the idea of
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