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On the page you can allow experience to express itself through the lens of reflection You have a semblance of control because you can always tear it to shreds or press the delete key You can mull things over take things back scratch out and revise something you can never really do after words have been spoken The page allows for a pact of privacy you dont have to show anyone what youve written Its just you and a piece of paper or the screen the ultimate confidante What would you do if the one you loved turned out to be someone you never knew When relationships get tough some people flee and others stay and work it out But how much working out would it take for one to say I cant do this anymore There is always one person in between the two that cares more My first real relationship started great and then obstacles in the middle stirred the relationships off course leading to a messy and dysfunctional breakup I was a young open hearted teenager just entering high school One day at lunch I was headed to my lunch table and I heard a voice say Hey Kortne I noticed it was this cute guy I saw around school but I never knew his name I approached him and said Are you talking me I dont think weve met before He reached his hand out to me and said Well hey my name is Daulton I shyly shook his hand as our eyes connected Right then and there I knew there was something special about him From that moment on Daulton and I talked more often He was a very strong caring person Daulton had a huge heart and was his own person He had a younger brother that he loved deeply Me on the other hand I was a very welcoming person I always cared so
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