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My life started out like one of those sappy Hallmark films that youhate to love I had the perfect cook for a mom the big strong dad thatcould fix anything no matter how broke it seemed an older brother formy best friend and an older sister to teach me everything I needed toknow Everything that I had known as a kid was fun filled from runningin our fields with my dad or trying to convince myself I liked tomatoesto be like the rest of the family The worst thing had happened to mewhen my puppy died a few days after I got him That all didnt lastthough a couple years after I was born my dad got sick so my earlychildhood was filled with many different doctors offices and hospitalsI was born on May 11 1995 in Terre Haute Indiana to a family of fourready to be five My name is Emily Marie Montoya named after my greatgrandpa Elmer and my grandma Treva Marie My parents Michelle MarleneReckerd and Timothy Eddie Montoya met in Hawaii in 1989 with the helpof my older sister My mom always told me that it was really my sisterwho had picked out my dad for her My father was in the navy and due toship out soon My parents fell in love and shortly after they marriedstill strangers and got shipped back to the states A few years afterthey moved back they had my brother Timothy Oliver When I was little I lived in Brazil Indiana and the first home I everknew From the day they brought me home from the hospital I wasdifferent than my brother and sister I wanted nothing to do withanyone I just wanted left alone but that only lasted a while I waslucky enough to grow up with a brother just a few years older to watchmy every move and make sure I stayed out of trouble Trouble almostcomes with
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