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It was a Fall evening the time was 1030pm and my phone rings YesJordan I saidHey Jb can you do me a huge favor I am over at Mikes and I amwanting to leave in like an hour do you think you could pick me upJordan explained Sure Jordan I ended I hang up the phone and my friend Murphy and Icontinue cruising on gravel roads doing things I cant go into detailabout The night beginsJordan is a friend from high school and all throughout high school I amalmost positive she liked me Murphy is one of my best friends who alsowent to my high school We have had a lot of good times together buttonight were most memorable The sky was as dark as a black stallionThe air was dry and the wind was a blowing Murphy and I had no ideawhat events lay ahead of us An hour goes by and Jordan calls back on the dot She is ready to bepicked up so Murphy and I head over to my high school friend Mikeshouse where Jordan had been that night Mike has a long driveway and aninety degree turn leading up his barn where all of them had beenpartying We arrive to find Jordan in her car drunk trying to drivehome This random kid whom I didnt know jumped on her hood trying tostop her from making a bad mistake But she refused and punched the gaspedal almost injuring the kid our mouths just dropped we didnt knowwhat to say That could have been a bad situationI ran over to Jordans car yelling get out of the car She startedmaking a big deal about how she is fine to drive when clearly shewasnt We bickered for about ten minutes until I finally just gave into her and I hopped in the front passenger seat in her car while herfriend Bailey got in back Jordan sped off and I knew that this was
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