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Hurry up Lisa Make a wish and blow the candles exclaimed Mr and Mrs Jones It was Lisas 7th birthday and the Jones were celebrating it in their large luxurious living room Lisa was the happiest girl because she basically had everything every toy she wanted Her parents had her in their mid forties so Lisa was a very valuable gift to them So that was the reason why they bought her everything she asked for making her the happiest yet the brattiest kid on earthAfter Lisa made a wish and blew her candles off Mr Jones brought a huge box wrapped in fancy paper With excitement Lisa hurriedly unwrapped the box and took our the precious gift that was lying there Lisa stared into the eyes of the life-sized doll with amazement it was as though she was staring into a mirrorOh thanks mommy and daddy This is the best thing Ive ever gotten in my whole entire life Im going to name my new doll Dorothy cried Lisa with joy From that day on Dorothy took a big portion of Lisas life because she shared everything with her doll They did everything together and even dressed alike It was as if Dorothy had become Lisas twin sisterHowever as time passed by and Lisa aged Dorothy slowly faded away from Lisas life Dorothy was no longer her favorite doll Actually Lisa no longer played with dolls she was too busy playing with her friends and shopping Dorothy who used to sleep besides Lisa on her comfortable laced bed now slept in an old dirty toy box along with other ugly useless toys Meanwhile Lisa was becoming a messed up teenager Her parents love had turned her into a slick evil brat who only cared for herself All she did in return of the love her parents had poured to her was to occasionally run away from home and to perform poorly in school Due
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