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Educating the Public to Encourage Clean Energy Adoption

In this expository essay, a student discusses how nations can encourage their populations to adopt energy-efficient practices and embrace clean energy in general. The student notes that education campaigns play a big role in such an endeavor.
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Angela's feedback:

"You present many valid and compelling ideas concerning clean energy use and best practices to encourage people to use energy more mindfully. However, your essay lacks cohesiveness and would benefit from a thesis statement that clearly states your purpose for writing the work as well as the main ideas you plan to cover. Giving the reader a road map for your essay will make it easier for the reader to assess how effectively you've accomplished your writing task. In terms of writing conventions, you have a tendency to overuse the comma, especially before a conjunction such as "and." Moreover, there is an issue with parallel structure in the statement that begins "Handing out." There are also a few sentence fragments that should be recast to improve the clarity and flow of your work."

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