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2 Discuss some issues of personal local national or international concern and its importance to you Common Application250-500 wordsTok Tok TokWhen the bell rings at 220 in the afternoon students hurry to turn on their cell phones and then rush towards their lockers to get their books and binders Some celebrate that the day is finally over Others constantly check their phones for any notifications Among them exist my friendsIn their world there is no direct interaction with the outside world Only isolation exists With their heads bent over the cell phones and their fingers being busy pressing buttons on the screen my friends have a one-to-one conference with their smartphones while making their real-world friends who try to initiate a conversation bodyguards in black suits Then in the long hallway of my school my friends form a long line as if they were part of Henry Fords assembly line Still oblivious to the outer world they perform a cyclepress Send button wait for replies and respondAs one of such bodyguards I merely stare at my obsolete phone pretending to carry out the cycle as wellOver the past decades the world has become a place where people prefer miniature and efficient devices to enormous and clumsy electronic items One of such inventions is a smartphone When first introduced it was not so much different from the pre-existing cell phones in the market However after Theodore George Paraskevakos combined the cutting-edge computer technology to the conventional phone functions the history of cell phones faced a remarkable turning pointpresenting a clever but addiction-inducing gadget Even though the product is available in any places and at any time for giving information to its users and soothes the lonely by acting as a toy it tends to preoccupy their lives with its overwhelming power These people deprived of practicing social skills such as eloquence and confidence become seemingly autism-suffering patients Those who cannot afford to purchase smartphones
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