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If I had the ability to go back in time and change a day in my life I would change the day my father physically abused my mother right in front of me I would have wanted the power to just grow up and stop him I would have dialed 911 and told the police everything I saw I would go back and change this day because domestic violence is one of the worst actions a person could ever engage inDomestic violence usually occurs in an intimate relationship when one of the partners is under the consumption of alcohol or diagnosed with a mental illness My father Maximo Martin Javier was an alcoholic For years my mother was verbally and physically hurt I was just an innocent four-year-old bystander But I honestly do not care if I was four-years-old The woman who gave birth to me was being hurt I still recall vivid recapitulations of that dreadful day I reminisce back to the horrid screams that came from my mother I remember the salty tears that ran down our cheeks I also look back on the cherry red marks he made as he battered her chestMy mother was a strong woman who was never nervous but that day literally destroyed her self-esteem she became depressed and suffered anxiety The anxiety came from my dad sneaking into her apartment in the middle of the night peeping into our room and taking our car as well Because I did not fully comprehend the situation I always asked my mom if she wanted me to make her tea or give her medicine when I saw her in the bed crying I walked away baffled when she said no mija my daughter and gave me a kiss on the forehead Maybe she has Mariposas butterflies in her tummy I would tell my grandmother who often visited Now I know that was not the circumstanceYes my father is an intelligent
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