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Bob's feedback:
"You've done a good job of illustrating the suffering that Eliezer endures throughout the book. This is an important novel about an infamous and tragic time, and you treat it with respect and compassion.
While your first paragraph provides context for the story, it doesn't give the reader an idea of what the essay will be about. Make sure to introduce the novel and your thesis statement within that first paragraph. You may not need as much historical context for such a well-known historical period.
You make the claim that Eliezer suffers "the most." This indicates a comparison with other characters, but very little attention is given to the plight of others in the story. If you wish to use this comparison as your topic, it will be necessary to discuss what some of the other characters endure and show that Elizer's experience is even more difficult.
Make sure to proofread thoroughly to address some awkward sentences and grammatical errors."
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Kibin. (2024). Eliezer's suffering in night by elie wiesel. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/eliezers-suffering-in-night-by-elie-wiesel-KKj0WeS9
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