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Walking on the court I felt tension in the room I knew this game of volleyball wouldnt be friendly nor easy so I knew I had to get serious and let out my competitive side My team rotates because weve won the point and suddenly I freeze because I knew it was my turn to serve I take a look at the score and my face turns ghost white because its game point Being competitive is a trait that everyone portrays but it is up to you how you decide how to use it whether for your advantage or disadvantage You will never not use competition in your life you need it more than you think Competition provides you that imaginary push that you need to try and stand out from everyone around you I call it the push to success Incorporating competition into your life you receive this adrenaline feeling when you do something good Besides that competition helps you think outside the box and be the froot loop inside a bowl of cheerios Living in a country like America it is the place of opportunity raising the bar and competition level through the roof You have to stand out and have the best resume for the jobcollegewhatever it is The people with high goals and high future hopes all want to live on the penthouse floor without money you cant have the penthouse floor Without a good education you cant have money Without a good education you cant have anything See where Im getting at Youre in a constant game of tug a war you being on one side the rest of the world being on the other If you dont have the right amount of competition in your blood you wont have the necessity to stand out Adrenaline is what makes the world go round Its an addiction that everyone likes Good competitors dont only use the idea of competition
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