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90375 21 Produce crafted and developed creative writing Student exemplars and moderator comments for grade boundariesSee alsoThe HYPERLINK httpwwwnzqagovtnznqfdocsunitspdf90375pdf90375 standard including explanatory notesThe HYPERLINKhttpwwwnzqagovtnzncearesourcesenglishwritinghtmlclarification document for writingThe HYPERLINKhttpwwwtkiorgnzesearchresultsphp13AelemDCSubjectClassification13AvalNCEA3BEnglish13AvalopAND13Asearchtypeterm23AelemTKILevel23AvalNCEALevel223AvalopAND23Asearchtypetermxsllangenxslpathsearchresultsephp internal assessment resources forthis standardThe following are grade boundary student answers for this standard All six samples have been annotated to explain why they just meet or donot meet the standardStudent Sample 1 Not Achieved This work does not yet meet the standard at AchievedAchieved criteriadevelop and sustain ideascraft writing to create effects that are appropriate to audiencepurpose and text typestructure material in a way that is appropriate to audience purpose andtext typeuse writing conventions accuratelyText type Description about a place Resource Being ThereWhy does this response not meet the standard at AchievedThe writing re-tells an event rather than develop and sustain ideas Explanatory Note 4 says that develop and sustain ideas means to buildon a single idea by adding detail linking that idea to other ideas anddetails andor maintaining and echoing images or moods throughdescription and additional informationTo meet the text type Explanatory Note 5 states that the craftingshould involve a systematic process of reworking and reshaping thewriting and selecting language deliberately to achieve a coherentplanned wholeStructure material in a way that is appropriate to audience purpose andtext type needs to be specific to this piece Syntax needs further attention particularly in the use of past andpresent tenses It does not meet the first criterion Although the first paragraphs dofocus on the weather and the cause of the accident the piece thenbecomes a recount of an event rather than the development of an ideaThe work does not use writing conventions accurately Syntax needsattention See italicised There are a number of errors in mixed pastand present tenses Although some attempt at crafting has been made see bold the writingis not sufficiently crafted second criterion The piece is not structured in a way that is appropriate to
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