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Common Essay 650 words is your limit not your goal Use the full range if you need it but dont feel obligated to do so The application wont accept a response shorter than 250 words Recount an incident or time when you experienced failure How did it affect you and what lessons did you learnDo any of your parents work for media companies or governmentNoDo you have any financial supportersNoI am afraid I cant help you then even though you will pay for building the website We wont waste our time on something doomed to fail My heart sank as the cruel words refusing our plan to build a website to raise money for the children in poverty-stricken areas in China come out of the mouth of the website companys representative The children who are longing for help and the commission wed like to pay could not change the representatives minds Today is the third day since we started looking for a website company but weve got nothing but countless rejections until nowI felt helpless and frustrated Why bother spending twenty days collecting information of the needy children Maybe we should have just enjoyed a carefree holiday I had managed not to let the doubts get the better of me or tempt myself into believing I had made a mistake in trying to help the children for the past several weeks but I couldnt help questioning our plan nowI remembered how I got inspired for the plan appealed to my friends for involvement and how we developed the plan went to the poverty-stricken areas to collect childrens information and promised to bring donations to help I couldnt believe we got stuck on this small step we never worried aboutWhy is it so hard Is it not enough to gather information of the children who cannot afford their tuitions and put the information on the website We did not expect this to be a demanding
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