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As an incoming college student enrolled in a writing course I believe I have plenty strengths and some weaknesses I hope to strengthen throughout this course For example one of my weaknesses is organizing an essay throughout writing I tend to place sentences andor paragraphs in the wrong order Sometimes I have long complicated sentences that dont belong During my writing I have problems with repetition my brain loses it and I may type the same thing just in a different way I struggle with putting my thoughts into my writing not giving enough detailed information As far as my strengths go I use good vocabulary and proper grammar when writing an essay I also brainstorm really good ideas until my weakness kicks in and its just not enough information to finalize the paper During this English course I look forward to learning the fundamentals of writing I also look forward to bettering my writing and strengthening my weaknesses My concerns in this course would have to be meeting the goals of writing especially when theres a certain amount of words to be written Basically because I tend to lack information when brainstorming When I face one of those challenges I try researching more information add more enthusiastic words or find interesting factsHonestly I havent really had a writing course in high school my English classes were more like reading classes Most of the things I know about writing Ive picked up on my own throughout high school When it came to writing essays I basically used Google for information on how to do it step-by-step information Dont get me wrong there was a few things taught in class I felt as if it wasnt enough to have a nice paper such as sentence structure and supportive detailsWhile in this course there are a few things I hope to address far as detailed information sentence structure and organizing My sentence structure is ridiculous
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