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Exploring Mental and Physical Self-Concept

This essay explores questions of self-concept, with reference to relativism (and relativity), nature versus nurture, Plato, Buddha, and beyond. The student finds more questions than answers in this philosophical journey.
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Bridget's feedback:

"You bring a personal touch to these classic big questions and ideas, keeping the reader engaged as you explore the various threads that are picked up. I would like to check in on prompt and purpose, as this is marked as an expository essay but reads in a more exploratory mode. Shifting into expository will probably entail a more disciplined structure, incorporation of evidence, and dialing back the first person -- check up with your assignment details to vet your various rhetorical decisions in your approach.

I notice some lower-order concerns that can be addressed with a careful proofread for errors and to ensure clarity. As a final note, and as the reader, I felt the final sentence fizzled out on the word choice of "may" -- the tone prior to the ending dialogue is more assertive; think about how you want to "go out" in the end, whether via the more cautious voice expressed in the exchange or in the more assertive narrative voice of the essay."

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