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It was late fall and the trees were bare I had planned a camping trip with my two older brothers With only the supplies we could carry we set out towards the mountains We arrived around noon and quickly started walking up the steep mountain to find a spot A cool breeze poured down the mountain side towards an old narrow logging road We tossed our bags on the dirt road and each went out to gather supplies I took my machete to a few skinny trees and drug them back to camp My brother searched through the woods for anything still covered in leaves My other brother had been making a fire pit with some rock found by a spring that was a few yards from us After returning to the campsite with more trees and a bit of rope I formulated a plan I chopped a couple saplings into 4 foot sections and tied them to longer trees By this time my brother had returned with a few scrawny Evergreens for the roof We fashioned the trees into a basic lean-to and threw the Evergreens on top The sun was setting and the temperature was slowly dropping We started a fire on the edge of the road right out in front of our lean-to The warmth of the fire raised our spirits but also made us even hungrier Out came the hotdogs and slaw but of course we had forgotten buns We each found a small stick skewer to cook our hotdogs over the fire There were 16 hotdogs when we started and thirty minutes later not a single one left nor even a bit of slaw Both my brothers will attest that it was the best meal ever The sun had climbed over the mountain and night was upon us Quickly we gathered
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