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Dear journalI have been on this boat for what seems like years but in reality it has only been two months since I was taken by white men from my home in Nigeria We tried to stop the white men from getting into our village but they had better weapons then we had The tied everybody up and marched us in a line for days on end If you were to stop you were beaten or left there to die We received very little food and water on this walk and many people were suffering of dehydration After walking for about 2 weeks we got to a huge body of water that I would later found out was the Atlantic Ocean A little bit more than half of my tribe was still with us when we reached the water and I had to leave my wife and my brother behind I was put in a room with 100 other Africans that were taken from their homes just like I was We were feed very little and when we were feed we had to fight for the food just to survive I stayed in this room for only about a week and a half till I was taken out by a white man He cleaned me off and feed me this was going with many others just like me Then a men walked by checking out each African to see if he or she was healthy If you were chosen you were taken to a boat and chained down under the deck I was chosen because I am a strong young man at the age of 22 years They sat me down in front of a fire and they were heating up a large metal rod The pulled the metal out of the fire and it was glowing red then they moved it closer to me and I tried to move away but they held me
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