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"You've gathered good data and statistics and presented them pretty well. There are some minor, but repeated, grammar inconsistencies. Your thesis, opening, and conclusion could use some work. I get a feel for what this essay is arguing for, but I'm not sure if the purpose is simply to identify the things that drive young men to violence or if this is a call to action for society to step up. It sounds like a call to action, but I don't see examples of solutions. For example, you've identified lack of father figures as a problem, but how can society combat that? Without identified solutions, it's hard to call this a call to action."
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