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New shy nervous that was how I felt on the first day of school Barely knowing my way around until I meet Nawar She was friendly and always stopped to talk to me This is how I got one of my aspects of who I am A Source of identity is in my friends and family They are who I am with most of the time I was a new kid at carmel middle school and was going on the 8th grade trip lava beds I didnt know anyone until I meet my friend Nawar The first time I meet nawar was on the first day of school at carmel middle Well it wasnt exactly the first day of school is was more towards the middle of first trimester It began when we were going on the 8th grade trip lava beds We needed people to fill up the tent so kacey introduced me to Nawar and we all getting along very well together As the day came to go to lava beds we all got our stuff together and loaded it into the car The car was with Mrs Kendall Tasha Kacey Nawar and me We headed up to the campsite which was on the border of Oregon The car ride was very long and pretty much all we did was listen to music and laugh Mr Buran joined our car when we stopped for gas and he loved to listen to the song Pumped up kicks Whenever he would get in the car he would say can we listen to the song pumped up kicks by foster the people Once the song would play he would go crazy jumping up in down in his seat singing with his incredible voice and laughing just as all of us were Almost to the campsite everyone in our car were practically asleep Nawar was wide awake compared to everyone
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