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People nowadays always say to follow your dreams and to always shoot for the stars They talk about doing something that you can see yourself doing five to ten years down the line These people always seem to have a story that goes along with why they are saying this I have an experience of my own one about not doing what I love because I thought I found a new love An experience about me quitting a sport because I thought I found a new talent in video games It has been an experience that has changed my life and has helped me see what is missing The sport that I will be primarily talking about is my favorite sport soccer When I was young my parents made my oldest brother play soccer He was no good at it but whenever my parents would bring me along to these practices I would go and play with my brothers team They were much older and much taller than me but that never made me quit I would go and play with them and I would have the time of my life playing soccer with these kids One afternoon this changed My parents seeing that I loved this sport and playing around with the ball thought that I was old enough to join a team of my own A team that I could practice with and play real soccer games with This made me so excited I couldnt believe I would finally have a team of my own I quickly realized that this was an amazing game that I could love and grow up with all my life My brother having no athletic talent what so ever decided that he would quit at a young age and never do a sport again I didnt want to be like my brother - I loved sports and I always wanted sports to be in my life When I
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