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Kibin. (2024). Genetic diversity of primate species. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/genetic-diversity-of-primate-species-WolD5II1
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"You can omit the article “the” when referring to a general class such as non-human primates. Avoid repeating phrases in close proximity. For example, you can simply write “these traits” instead of repeating the entire phrase, “exceptional intelligence and better reliance on stereoscopic vision.” Notice that when referring to primates with greater sizes, the phrase “unlike those with smaller weights” adds no information, since it is implied. Place a space before units (lbs in this case) except for degrees. It is good practice to place a comma after the penultimate member of a list, and many formats require it. You indicate there are six superfamilies, and you list three, followed by another sentence listing the other three. You should list them all in one sentence. You commit various grammatical errors, some of which can be identified by a grammar check. You should also proofread your work."
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Kibin. (2024). Genetic diversity of primate species. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/genetic-diversity-of-primate-species-WolD5II1
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