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Gazing at the sun rising over the stables on our early morning trail ride is a memory that is forever imprinted in my mind The horse stables represented a certain unexplainable bond between my mother and I It was there where my mother would sit on the fence for hours and watch every one of my riding lessons At ten years old I believed that I possessed all that I could ever ask for and more I had a loving family the opportunity to ride my horse everyday and an amazing mother to make it all possible What I did not expect was to have it all ripped out of my life in an instant It was a Saturday morning in September and the day of my most important horse show yet I took one look out at the crowd and my palms began to sweat profusely My heart felt as if it was pounding out of my chest and I was anticipating the words Kendall Miller you may begin For one last time I peered out at the crowd and sure enough my mother was sitting in the front row She had a video camera attached to her hand making sure she did not miss one moment of my big day Before I knew it the results were in and again I found myself anticipating the announcers voice My nervousness soon turned into excitement when I heard that I had been awarded Grand Champion of the hunter jumper division Along with a trophy that was taller than myself my mother and I received two invitations to a winners banquet that would be held later that night In addition to such a fulfilling day at the horse show the banquet was just the icing on the cake The night consisted of dancing food friends and family We had such an amazing time celebrating that we were even a bit hesitant to leaveWhile walking on the
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