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The moon was shining up above the dark sky on that chilly Thursday night the thirteenth of June in the city of Newport Beach and I was sitting on a table in front of Caseys Cupcakes with Stefany my date Stefany and I had been acquaintances for a very long time but we were never really friend up to this point We had been going to the same church for about Ten years three years in I developed a crush on her for three months and it rapidly blossomed into liking her Six years later from where that crush began and here we were on our first official date at Caseys cupcakes We had ordered one cupcake for us to both share it was some type of coconut flavored cupcake but I do not remember exactly Stefany her hands quivering with excitement eyes full of anticipation looking at the pink pin striped box steadily opened the lid topped with chocolate shavings she pulled the heavenly cupcake towards her mouth devouring it as her eyes grew with amazement of how great it taste She did not know it but I kept that hot pink pin striped generic box the cupcake came in Getting home later that night grabbing a pen pulling a chair towards me and sitting bar a table I began to write the date it was on the cupcake box My idea was to keep the box just to have something to remember our first date by the box became a very sweet memory stored somewhere in my room After multiple dates I acquired a bundle of things that I have kept from us going out together such as utensils that I took from the first time we went to a restaurant together a letter she wrote me and a few pictures we have taken together All those things have been stored away in a storage container that is under my bed
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