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So young yet so little to little to realize what was actually happening to me between my two eyes I can remember like it was yesterdayIn 2000 on a Halloween night I saw the strangest thing ever in my room As my mother put me to bed the air felt so strange not the same like it always did It was so cold as if my room could have been a ice-box The coldness could have been from outside because it was a cold Halloween like how it sometimes is Before my mom went out of my bedroom she turned on my radio on soft so I could fall asleep Then she shut the door I was listening to the music and gently falling asleep As soon as the lights went out Thats were things went weird The wind was blistering hard threw the house You could hear it rumble threw the cracks that it was trying to get between It started to get cold in my room so cold that I could feel the cold wind on my arms So I got up to shut my windows but the windows were completely closed and also locked I was so confused but I went back to bed anyway Soon after I was about to fall asleep something else was strange the guy on the radio said a funny Halloween joke then said dont look up stairs Frightened but also questioning to myself like how do you know Im upstairs So when I sat from my bed I saw a dark shadow he looked like a grown captain hook but scarier he was bent over at my door It looked like he was looking at my door knob When I that the room begun to feel so quiet still and so quiet that I felt like I could not move I was so memorized that u could not believe my
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