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This paper examines the role of attentional vigilance on early threatrecognition and strategic change in the period leading up to thefinancial crisis in 2007 among US banking firms This paper is wellwritten and thus it takes little effort to understand what is happeningHowever there is one important concern with the paper that I willhighlight to begin this letter I dont think that that this paper isactually about attentional vigilance Instead it is about threedifferent types of attentional focus ie external future and changeBoth your theoretical constructs and empirical measurements do notsuccessfully capture the essence of attentional vigilance Therefore Iwould suggest you might want to decide whether to keep pushing yourpaper with the concept of attentional vigilance or not You should thinkvery carefully about ways to reposition your paper to more accuratelyreflect its actual focus and how you contribute to literatures thatspeak directly to that focus I would think that a complete overhaulhere might be the best way to go- if you decide to go with the conceptof attentional vigilance over the entirety of the paper the currentversion of the paper needs more work to clarify its theoreticalcontribution mechanisms and empirical measures It would be alsoanother alternative for you to come up with an overarching term thatbetter represents your current constructs and justify its theoreticalimportance I hope you find the comments below helpful for understanding keyconcerns in the paper as well as for addressing them as you take theresearch forward 1 Motivation and FramingThis study attempts to describe the theoretical and empirical work withthe notion of attentional vigilance As I will describe in more detailthis paper is not about attentional vigilance in both theoretical andempirical standpoints It seems at least to this reviewer that thecurrent version of your paper addresses a question of what particularkinds of attentional focus are beneficial for earlier threat recognitionand strategic change in response to the financial crisis in US bankingfirms From an empirical sense what you actually tested in your contentanalyses
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