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This is my second time going to a Coldplay concert and I hope its the best I skip to the arena in my red and black leopard-printed jeans and my bright neon t-shirt My hair is straightened and dip dyed into a purple color The security guard looks through my little blue purse and lets me go inside I run all the way up the stairs to receive my purple and green Xyloband Excitement rushes through me as I run through the door that leads me down the stairs to the floor seats I booked Luckily I am one of the first people to show up so I get as close to the stage as I can The sun is beams down on the crowd and I can feel it burning through my skin My friends show up dancing with excitement The opening act enters the stage and by pure chance it is one of my favorite bands The Wombats They march onto the stage in their white suits as I turn red and scream so loud Im afraid my ears will pop After the act finishes the screens tell us to put on our Xylobands A burst of yellow light explodes on the stage and Coldplay is on stage jamming their song Yellow in a matter of seconds I scream at the top of my lungs and I cant believe what I am seeing My friends and I dance and sing to their emotional and enjoyable music They start playing their song Strawberry Swing and Chris starts to run around and touch peoples hands This is my chance I think to myself As he nears to my side of the stage I push my way through the tight spaces and grab onto Chriss hand Im your biggest fan I scream to him He looks at me with his light blue eyes his face is red and his sweat trickles down onto my fingers Suddenly
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