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Its a battle I will have to face for the rest of my life but its a battle Im determined to fight There are wounds that are impossible for a person to see on the outside the kind of wounds that are so easily hidden on the inside I even wonder how I began as a happy child and then have that happiness ripped out of my hands like it never happened I grew up in a normal loving family with the typical brother whose reason for existing is to make mine miserable There wasnt a day that went by that I didnt tell my dad to trade my brother in for a gold fish but my five year old self got over it I was a creative little kid that loved to sing along to the radio until my mom would go deaf She would then trick my gullible little mind by convincing me that being quiet was a game I had the kind of spirit to make everything an adventure even if it gave my dad a speeding ticket Dad go faster dad go faster I said in the car ride home from just about anywhere As a result Ive always made life a race to the Finish line I was constantly trying to be the best and competing with perfection As I started to get stuck in this routine before long I couldnt find the brakes At this moment in my life when I was still considered too short to ride the rollercoasters cant cross the street by myself and complaining how life was so unfair are the moments when my innocence was still untouched and my mistakes were still unwritten As brave as the girl I was I was never prepared for the judgmental world ahead of me I didnt transition into school as well as the others I never understood why I was the way I was because
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