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My mom left me home alone with my dad for one week She thought not much could go wrong in one week When she came home her life was turned upside down She always tells me her biggest mistake was trusting my dad Aunt Tara moved to Texas a few months ago My mother has never been apart from her sister She did not take the move well Several family members suggested that she should visit her sister in Texas Mom agreed she really needed to see Tara There was only one problem that came about by going I was eight years old at the time and Ive never been away from her Dad of course offered to babysit She thought it would be good for me to spend some quality time with my dad He was told to babysit me for one week at my mothers house Something strange happened after my mom left for Texas that day My dad began carrying things into my house He brought so many boxes that they filled the living room This was all so confusing before I could ask a question he told me to get in the car The car ride was about an hour before arriving at his girlfriends parents house He told me he would only be a minute as he ran into the house Twenty minutes later he came back out with his girlfriend Pam Pam came out with her hands filled with pillows blankets food drinks and an iPod for me to listen to I thought Pam was pretty stupid for thinking my house did not have all those things Then unfortunately we were back on the road Pulling out onto a long winded road Pam begins to scream out Stop Stop Stop My dad slammed on the breaks Pam ran out of the car picked up two baby kittens She threw them in the back with me and we drove off
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