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This murder story is about a man sneaking into a womans home and shoots her with nail gun in the head How this story starts out is there is a woman named Hannah who lives in Brooklyn New York in a small neighbor hood and works at a motel in the getto and lives by her self One morning Hannah woke and went down stairs for breakfast The she went back up stairs and got a shower Then got dressed and went to work at her job where she works as a desk mangiger She works at the motel from 9 AM till 10 PM Today been a slow day and she was stuck there all day It was the end of the day as she was on her way home a man started following her home Every time she would turn around there would be nobody behind her Then when she got home she went and got changed in comfy cloths She went and made her self dinner While she was making dinner she watched TV once her dinner was completed she went and got her food and went back and watched TV While she was watching TV there was a commercial about a lose killer out on the streets As she was watching TV she did not know a man snuck into her house This man that snuck in she did not know he was there This man was the killer that was on the lose Was the man that was following her home An hour later when she was getting ready to turn the TV off the man came up behind her and shot her in the back of the head with a nail gun and ran When the man left he ran out with leaving the door open The neighbor next door came over to see what was happaning Because she heard a gun like shot and
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