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My senior year of high school I started helping out at my dance studio The age group that I helped with were the five year old girls and one of my responsibilities was choreographing and teaching a dance to them One thing that I learned through this experience was that five year olds have little to no attention span While five year old girls may seem cute and adorable they can easily turn annoying when you have to teach them a dance When my group of fifteen five year olds would come stomping down the steps into the dance studio I knew that I was in for an hour long headache The first thing we would do at the beginning of class was to stretch but that would usually be delayed by all the hands reaching up to me and excited voices saying Miss Lindsay I would hear fifteen little voices fighting for my attention as they would tell me stories about their dog or their day at school all at once After hearing little snippets of everyones stories we would finally begin stretching As soon as I would turn on the music to begin stretching all the little girls would start doing their own silly dances or playing different games such as tag In the beginning it was cute but after a minute of this it started to get tiresome Once I finally got everyone to calm down a little we finally begun to stretch After we finished stretching each little girl would stand in her assigned spot in the formation No matter where they were placed each girl would complain about being in the back or not being beside their best friend Once all the complaining about where they stood was over we would start to learn the new dance The dances were usually simple little routines to fun energetic songs Songs like Hey Mickey or Barbie Girl were usually the type of
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