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Change is inevitable especially in high school People are just finding out who they want to be for the rest of their lives and for many that journey is physically and emotionally draining My experiences were dramatic and I wouldnt wish them on my worst enemy but they molded the person I am today My journey begins with one person and ends with someone completely differentIt was February of my freshman year and i was about to turn 15 MORP was coming up which is a dance where girls ask the guys I really wanted to go with this guy in my History class who I had liked for a long while We were friends but I thought I didnt have a chance My friend Allison decided to have some fun with me by making a bet I wouldnt ask anyone to the dance The minute she said that I texted him and asked if he would be my date He said maybe and my heart sunk from my experience maybe always meant no When I got to school that Monday I was worried to deal with him I just prayed I hadnt lost him as a friend as I walked in I held my breath He said hi to me like he did every other morning as if nothing had happened Weeks past and everything was still as if nothing had happened but I also didnt have an answer It was about two weeks before the dance and he texted me like he did every night We got on the subject about the dance so I asked him what his maybe meant and he said yes I was so excited It was the night of the dance and I felt like my heart was going to pop out of my chest Unfortunately the night didnt go how I hoped it would He basically ignored me the whole night and danced with other girls then
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