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Historians Sum up the Crusade's Impact on Early European History

This paper highlights how there are varying opinions about how the Crusades impacted European history. One perspective is that the holy wars were good for the culture. Another view is that the Crusades were a sham to strengthen the papacy. The last opinion presented is that the Crusades were the greatest disgrace that organized religion has seen.
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Jenn's feedback:

"First, your paper is excellently formatted, which is essential because a neatly formatted paper has improved reading comprehension and cohesiveness. Regarding the other aspects of the report, you will significantly enhance the whole document with additional work.

To start, I recommend that you elaborate on the introduction and evaluate the text of the conclusion. The introduction should give a small amount of background context. Right now, your introduction primarily consists of only a thesis statement. Your conclusion should summarize the main points you made in the body of the paper and relate them to your thesis statement. Doing these two things will clarify the purpose of your essay and show the reader that you are focused on it throughout your writing. Overall, you did an excellent job with the content of your paper. You have used a lot of factual information to support the points that you are trying to make. I advise that you make sure to cite anything you obtained from texts to avoid plagiarism issues and make explicit connections between presented ideas. Also, make sure that you add a reference page at the end of your paper. Last, while you have a reasonably good handle on writing conventions, some places could benefit from some proofreading."

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