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"This is confusing because Bill Clinton left office 21 years ago. At any rate, the third sentence of this paper illustrates several issues. “Social Security” is written in lower case; it should be capitalized, as it is in the first sentence. This sentence also has a comma splice, which is the use of a comma to separate what should be two sentences. In addition, the sentence runs together two sentences without even a comma. Finally, “Time,” as a magazine title, should be italicized. Informal language such as “bull” should be avoided. The word “slated” should be “stated.” Davis Walker’s affiliation should be clearly identified. What is “chief of the general accounting in the office of congress?” To cite an opinion from an unspecified magazine article does not support one’s case. A specific story should be cited, and it should provide facts and not just someone’s opinion. Many statements are made concerning Bill Clinton’s character. This is fine, but these statements should relate to the topic at hand, and they should be shown to have some basis in fact."
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Kibin. (2024). Social security as political football. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/social-security-as-political-football-6EA2kgwi
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