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I like quotes about risks and love but reward quotes are all lies For example Princess Diana once said Carry out a random act of kindness with no expectation of reward This is totally wrong I have proof too When I cut my pinky my life whirled around completelyIt was supposed to be a normal day of 5th grade but that was before I knew something terrible was about to happen I went to my desk to prepare for the day and the bell work was to finish a project on the meiosis cycle I finished it already so I asked Ms Nousheen what to do Ms Ali my teacher was busy talking to a parent so the teacher assistant was in charge She said If you want you could help others with their project So I decided to help Aamina Naveed I came to her and she asked me to help her cut pipe cleaners for her while she pastes them on to the construction paper I started and it was going pretty well until one little error turned everything upside down When I was helping Aamina I cut a pipe cleaner or so I thought I felt a shot of pain run through my pinky finger and I really didnt want to see if it was as bad as I thought I risked it though and the blood was a color indescribable It was lighter than burgundy but not too light that it would be a magenta-ish color I fought back tears and ran to Ms Nousheen Everyone asked if I was okay and I nodded trying to show everyone I was brave The assistant teacher put on a Band-Aid and I said Um its kind of tight and my head is hurting Thats when I fellI think I was on the floor for about a minute When I opened my eyes everyone was backed up against the wall Ms Akram the gym
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