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My editorial is how the seriousness for school related sports has decreased Sports arent what they used to be People who say things like people are taking these sports too seriously or the sports are meant to be fun I think should rethink their opinion Of course they are taken seriously that doesnt necessarily mean they arent fun Personally I love all of the yelling and confusion that goes on all around sports whether its on TV or the court or on the field I also think that nowadays they arent being taken seriously enough These days sports have become much more that what they used to be I looked up the word sports in the dictionary and this is what it said 1 an amusing or interesting activity 2 a physical activity especially one with a set form and body of rules My definition of sports 1 a political game Why You may ask do I call it this The first reason is the coaches Take basketball for example Ive gone to a couple of my sisters basketball games shes in 5th grade and noticed that she has gone to every single practice and yet still sits the bench for most of the game She has two coaches and both of them have daughters on the team and both of their daughters play all of the game Even though I think that my sister is a little bit better than those two My father told me that when he was in 8th grade he had coaches that had coached the teams for years and years Not players parents Now dont get me wrong I have no problems with players parents coaching their sons or daughters team because I have on right now but I dont like when they arent fair Some of the parents go to their childs practice and make friends with the coach or suck up to them When I was in
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