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Tears began to create permanent streaks down face as I look up to see I am in the house of God with unfamiliar faces I was certain that at this point this guard I had up now feel and shortly I was in the arms of a man whose name I could not remember yet he spoke like he knew me all my life I never went to church not after my mom died My friend Nichelle persisted and for me to go almost dragged me out the house to go I hated the fact of even going to church Dragged me into an emotional state I was not ready for but yet I received I forgot how to not feel numb to actually have feeling but most of all I forgot that having a connection to God is the greatest feeling ever This was an experience of becoming saved what I was saved from and life as a saved personThe room was warm and inviting as I glanced around before sitting waiting and despising the minutes that became to accumulate waiting for service to begin I cannot begin to explain why church was not a place that I was not comfortable in but as the preacher began his word started to touch me I found the preacher words soothing nurturing and kind In my own trance I was called upon by this man I cannot describe young lady with this orange shirt please walk ahead because GOD is telling me something that I cannot ignore Peering over my shoulders looking for this girl in this orange shirt he spoke about following everyone eyes to see but shortly I found that girl was me My heart pumping faster as I felt like dashing out the church so fast I would leave smoke behind me but I could not I always ran from my fears so today I told myself I was going to face
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