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Only a minute before this place was filled with people and now I am the only one left Nobody has ever thought that the dance floor is not only a dance floor It can be a social gathering place a performance place and to me it is a self-revelation place Dancing exists in many different forms typical ballroom dance disco rave ballet hip-hop break-dance etc I twist I jump I spin on the dance floor surrounded by mirrors watching myself dancing with many other me twirling around the room The dance floor plays a big part in my life It is a place that gives me confidence courage comfort freedom I started to dance when I was negative one years old How should I say this I guess before I was born is more appropriate Thats is what my mom told me She told me that I was a very naughty baby I used to dance in her belly and because of that she believes that I am a gifted dancer I was sent to ballet lessons in the age of three I gave out my first solo performance in the age of 4 I practice day and night under the supervision of my teacher and my mother As a five years old girl I believe what they gave me were overwhelming I finally could not stand the stress and started to hate ballet hate the music hate the mirrors and of course the dance floor Fortunately a five years old is only a five years old I did not know how rebel against my parents I could just listen to what my parents and teacher said I said fortunate is because if I did rebel against my parents I wouldve gave up on dancing However at that time I really hate it I cried almost every night but no one
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