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What an excellent way to start off mt 13th birthday my dog got ran over by a car To make it better it was my own mother that did it He was my only true friend the only one that I really loved and cared for and now he is deadI hate my over-weight hard-ball of a mother It was her fault all her fault I dont blame her for not letting me have any friends over she to ashamed of herself And I hate to say this but I am ashamed of her to If people really knew what she was like they would be ashamed too She knew the only real friend I ever had was my cute little dog Marshall and then she turns around and killed him I HATE HER I HATE HER How could she be so careless how could have she not seen him he isnt that small I dont know what Im going to do without Marshall How will I ever get along Ill certainly miss waking up every morning and seeing him standing on his hind legs at the foot of my bed with his front paws braced against the side starring at me with his big brown eyes I can remember that his stubby tail would thump back and forth and he lean his head over and lick my face and neck with his warm rough thong Boy did I love that dog Im going to miss him so much Ill never find a friend quite like him he is irreplaceable Marshall didnt care about the way that I looked whether or not I was smart or stupid or even about the guys that I messed around with which is why my ape of a father resents me He never once put me down like everyone else He loved me and now hes gone and its all because of my motherIm going to miss Marshall but
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