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I once had a goldfish It always was so interesting to watch him swim around his bowl and do whatever a fish that lives in a 2 gallon bowl does to keep himself entertained Sometimes as a child Id imagine I was a fish in bowl having glass walls that everyone could see through watch me do whatever fishy things suited my fancy and be care free Now I understand why being a fish isnt as glamorous as I once thought Now the fish story has a point but lets change subjects Ever done something without thinking Made a mistake or done something that later bit you rather hard on the tail end Now imagine doing that and realizing later you arent the only one that knows about it Congratulations you are now a goldfish But unfortunately people dont have a 2 second attention span they remember what they see and later you will be reminded of that mistake I know as the reader this story is random and doesnt seem to have a point but trust me it does I am an athlete here at Newberry College and as an athlete you are in a fishbowl As a college athlete especially at a college that is predominately athletes everyone knows your name and face from fellow athletes to faculty all the way up to the president You are the face of your sport and of this college and because of that people want to see you succeed and want to see you thrive So yes you are in a fishbowl because people are always watching you I play a sport that I love and will always treasure my chance to play But I made a mistake one at the time I thought was something small and wouldnt catch me later Boy was I wrongThis past homecoming a drink was
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